Tuesday, February 13, 2007

Lee Assignment #3

It's up and down all the time
Sometimes its love
Other times its loathing
A pure hate that I can't control
That's now

But when I was young...it was all different
Up in his arms, on top of his shoulders, I was on top of the world
Whether it was up on stage, under a hundred lights
Or up on the couch, in front of the family
He was there for me, supporting me
And now
That's all that makes our love emerge again.

3 comments:

Morgan Goold said...

sam I LOVEE YOUU! this is really sad and NOT TRUE! happy "UNOFFICAL VALENTINES DAY" i <3 you more then life

CHOCOLATE!!!

kelly said...

SAYYYY UMMMM
SAMMMMMMMM
I LOVE YOU WITH ALL MY HEART!
SAMMO =)

Mr. Popken said...

Beautiful poem Sam. You compose with poise and confidence. I particularly like:"But when I was young...it was all different / Up in his arms, on top of his shoulders, I was on / top of the world."

Nice contrast of "love" and "loathing" brought together by alliteration.